tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post2813627023322849571..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: Lightning Flashed - blogfestmshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-33538338912761936052012-05-24T14:57:43.837-04:002012-05-24T14:57:43.837-04:00I apologize again for the cliffhanger, which wasn&...I apologize again for the cliffhanger, which wasn't very nice of me, I admit. But I'll tell you what, if I can come up with an outline for this idea, and finish my current wip, I'll give this one a go, k?mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-68052081885673889402012-05-24T12:27:28.395-04:002012-05-24T12:27:28.395-04:00Ack! What time? Oh, I want to read more. Great job...Ack! What time? Oh, I want to read more. Great job!<br /><br />I'll announce the finalists tomorrow.Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-59953647445486411882012-05-24T12:02:46.901-04:002012-05-24T12:02:46.901-04:00I want to know more! You better finish this :DI want to know more! You better finish this :DSylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05519691494230856599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-6439957235030529552012-05-24T00:35:11.720-04:002012-05-24T00:35:11.720-04:00I heart that she cast a "spell of gloom"...I heart that she cast a "spell of gloom" to get away to meet her Master! Wish I knew his trick with the rain too; I'm always losing my umbrellas. ;-) Cool story!<br /><a href="http://minalobo.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Some Dark Romantic</a>Mina Lobohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10173895884776280826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-54674220418140544212012-05-23T23:10:39.972-04:002012-05-23T23:10:39.972-04:00The time had come at last for what? I want to know...The time had come at last for what? I want to know more! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-26446796637660142432012-05-23T22:56:48.981-04:002012-05-23T22:56:48.981-04:00I'm intrigued to see where this story's he...I'm intrigued to see where this story's headed. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-6693158328695306562012-05-23T16:11:17.432-04:002012-05-23T16:11:17.432-04:00Very nice, but it ended too soon! LOL Good job and...Very nice, but it ended too soon! LOL Good job and nice sense of mystery, Marcy. :)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-82617358433122477002012-05-23T12:45:37.303-04:002012-05-23T12:45:37.303-04:00I would like whatever power it takes to make the r...I would like whatever power it takes to make the rain stop just over me. That's awesome.Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-29069948521334225542012-05-23T12:04:22.323-04:002012-05-23T12:04:22.323-04:00Oh I loved this. I'm so happy to see so many p...Oh I loved this. I'm so happy to see so many participants in Cherie's brilliant blogfest. And you're writing is spellbinding. Thank you for posting it :)Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-55183765006553525982012-05-23T10:35:05.970-04:002012-05-23T10:35:05.970-04:00The time for . . .what? dancing in the rain? a spe...The time for . . .what? dancing in the rain? a spell to wipe out the royal family? her sacrifice? a sailing trip in the storm? aah - the suspense and my imagination are killing me . . .<br />on a more sane note - Loved the description, and your compelling, interesting characters. Good job!Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-5732966944622134642012-05-23T00:53:59.348-04:002012-05-23T00:53:59.348-04:00Incredibly descriptive. Excellent post.Incredibly descriptive. Excellent post.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-8372623805019960742012-05-22T19:30:34.203-04:002012-05-22T19:30:34.203-04:00But... but... the time for what??
Allison (Geek B...But... but... the time for what??<br /><br />Allison (<a href="http://www.alsgeekbanter.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Geek Banter</a>)Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02586970076965983267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-3354089184411421112012-05-22T14:35:24.405-04:002012-05-22T14:35:24.405-04:00A cliffhanger ending! Drives me crazy :) This stor...A cliffhanger ending! Drives me crazy :) This story had me from the first image.Mary Maddoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11804303876835029488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-85293632963341677762012-05-22T14:09:38.539-04:002012-05-22T14:09:38.539-04:00What?! The time for WHAT? *sigh* Great premise and...What?! The time for WHAT? *sigh* Great premise and build. I'm still waiting for more of the story. How about a "To be continued..." in the next post, eh? =)Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-25956042299079727932012-05-22T09:34:38.788-04:002012-05-22T09:34:38.788-04:00I really enjoyed this! Cliff hangers are the best....I really enjoyed this! Cliff hangers are the best.Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-85309126184756694402012-05-21T22:51:55.521-04:002012-05-21T22:51:55.521-04:00Great! This kinda sounds like one of those blips y...Great! This kinda sounds like one of those blips you get at the beginning of a book... ... ?? :) I love the imagery. Very well done!Alicia Willette-Cookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174871217832164495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-38505370472218631922012-05-21T21:27:03.975-04:002012-05-21T21:27:03.975-04:00Ahhh, what a cliffhanger! :) Sucked us in and let...Ahhh, what a cliffhanger! :) Sucked us in and let us suffer!Heather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-43599107343140935812012-05-21T18:10:23.272-04:002012-05-21T18:10:23.272-04:00I know the blogfest has limitations...but could yo...I know the blogfest has limitations...but could you write a little more...pretty please?Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-56345403710861889432012-05-21T17:48:50.308-04:002012-05-21T17:48:50.308-04:00I apologize to everyone who wanted an "ending...I apologize to everyone who wanted an "ending." I'm not very good at short pieces and these blogfest prompts inevitably give me ideas for longer works and this one was no exception. Maybe it will turn into something but for now, all I can tell you is that 'she' doesn't have a name yet but I do know she's a spy, having been placed in the castle by her Master.<br /><br />Thank you everyone for coming by :)mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-63673123402142605912012-05-21T17:24:22.010-04:002012-05-21T17:24:22.010-04:00This is great!!!!...:)JPThis is great!!!!...:)JPjp@A Green Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15217268829093983376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-84527876631286721272012-05-21T16:37:22.952-04:002012-05-21T16:37:22.952-04:00Nice cliffhanger! Momma likes!Nice cliffhanger! Momma likes!Libbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14323538213636795216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-26691157273415593402012-05-21T14:17:44.291-04:002012-05-21T14:17:44.291-04:00Spells and knives...a great combination with the s...Spells and knives...a great combination with the sneak-and-creep atmosphere cleverly evoked with your wonderful word choice.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-65719966219128507382012-05-21T13:59:16.552-04:002012-05-21T13:59:16.552-04:00I'm with Alex, I want to know what comes next ...I'm with Alex, I want to know what comes next too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-53649366712548641522012-05-21T13:56:19.713-04:002012-05-21T13:56:19.713-04:00Very nice writing. And I agree - I want to know if...Very nice writing. And I agree - I want to know if the time has finally come, too. :) Best of luck!A.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-88002530044935131542012-05-21T13:28:26.978-04:002012-05-21T13:28:26.978-04:00Great descriptions, really made it easy to visuali...Great descriptions, really made it easy to visualise it all. The open ending was intriguing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com