tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post4919568555958295425..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: The Evolution of a Querymshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-82688267485532799142016-01-07T03:10:14.013-05:002016-01-07T03:10:14.013-05:00I say many thanks to the father of the website adm...I say many thanks to the father of the website admin I read this, because at this website I know a lot of information information that I did not know before his<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/WwrIoq" rel="nofollow">Suplemen Untuk Ibu Hamil</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/LGXweM" rel="nofollow">Cara Menjaga Kesehatan Janin</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/ri9IZm" rel="nofollow">Obat Penguat Daya Ingat</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/RjWs4O" rel="nofollow">Suplemen Pelangsing</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/3sDFmK" rel="nofollow">Vitamin Peremajaan Kulit</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/naXCsY" rel="nofollow">Vitamin Untuk Kesehatan Tulang</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/LE1bzv" rel="nofollow">Suplemen Herbal Penghilang Kolesterol Dalam Darah</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/GcnUIa" rel="nofollow">Suplemen Alami Penurun Kolesterol Tinggi</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/obqBh3" rel="nofollow">Green World Blueberry Concentrate</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/9sm51m" rel="nofollow">Nutrisi Untuk Kecerdasan Anak</a> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382737205881876895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-18719421954394486232015-07-27T16:48:48.577-04:002015-07-27T16:48:48.577-04:00Much luck to you, Marcy.Much luck to you, Marcy.The Happy Whiskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438469476168485775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-63611413424119679872015-07-25T21:28:58.044-04:002015-07-25T21:28:58.044-04:00Best of luck with what I am sure can be an arduous...Best of luck with what I am sure can be an arduous process.The Armchair Squidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739833215220853127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-88335993160717372102015-07-25T06:15:45.432-04:002015-07-25T06:15:45.432-04:00I like the beginning outline of the query very muc...I like the beginning outline of the query very much, especially the Einstein and Eagle Eye things. I love the premise & conflict. The choice has me a bit confused. Too vague. Your "blah, blah, blah," later cracked me up! I always write a query before I begin a novel. It helps keep the main conflict and goals front and center in my mind. Good luck with yours and have a great weekend! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-61995086249699590952015-07-23T14:36:46.216-04:002015-07-23T14:36:46.216-04:00where can I get me some chemical enhancements too?...where can I get me some chemical enhancements too? :) DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-58391615068000401722015-07-22T10:22:07.745-04:002015-07-22T10:22:07.745-04:00I agree. Those three Cs are vital to a successful ...I agree. Those three Cs are vital to a successful query. Best of luck revising!S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-79533730936537677632015-07-21T17:24:27.315-04:002015-07-21T17:24:27.315-04:00Pretty close to this - I usually end up with many ...Pretty close to this - I usually end up with many versions by the time I'm done and I save every version in case I had something good in an old one and want to go back and retrieve it. :) This MS sounds cool. :)Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17323788304469008867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-10089866578021791032015-07-21T09:49:35.541-04:002015-07-21T09:49:35.541-04:00Mine look about like that. Neat story. Very crea...Mine look about like that. Neat story. Very creative!Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-33059207406815300092015-07-20T22:22:34.981-04:002015-07-20T22:22:34.981-04:00I like how you've listed each of the elements....I like how you've listed each of the elements. It'll be interesting to see how they come together to form the completed query.Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-22737208275939112502015-07-20T14:47:22.736-04:002015-07-20T14:47:22.736-04:00*smiles* mine ramble a lot too. I think I do more ...*smiles* mine ramble a lot too. I think I do more revisions on a 200-300 word query than the 90k novel.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-7970627028308411092015-07-20T14:40:35.060-04:002015-07-20T14:40:35.060-04:00Thank you for the sneak peek into a writer's w...Thank you for the sneak peek into a writer's world. A mystery revealed.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-32000477335065398562015-07-20T12:31:20.556-04:002015-07-20T12:31:20.556-04:00I always tried for a hook first -- a two sentence ...I always tried for a hook first -- a two sentence hook/elevator pitch -- and then moved into a paragraph that delved deeper into character, conflict, and choice.Dianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-7606647364832707482015-07-20T07:31:53.939-04:002015-07-20T07:31:53.939-04:00I agree with Alex that is has to have character, c...I agree with Alex that is has to have character, conflict, and choice. My queries tend to be a big mess for quite awhile while I work on them.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-53021713986198908222015-07-20T06:17:39.896-04:002015-07-20T06:17:39.896-04:00Probably worse than that. Wait, definitely worse t...Probably worse than that. Wait, definitely worse than that.<br />Smart to break it down with character, conflict, and choice.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com