tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post8061890572005217492..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: First Impressions - Life is a Tongue Twistermshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-18656730530701450542013-11-07T21:42:31.472-05:002013-11-07T21:42:31.472-05:00I think it's a great opening - many mysteries ...I think it's a great opening - many mysteries to be revealed, yet we already have some key glimpses into the character.The Armchair Squidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739833215220853127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-32972877499515356322013-11-07T09:19:44.455-05:002013-11-07T09:19:44.455-05:00If I had a Hello, Kitty alarm clock, I think I'...If I had a Hello, Kitty alarm clock, I think I'd want it to break, too :)Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03745686632918324803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-10993766671686160142013-11-05T13:54:50.540-05:002013-11-05T13:54:50.540-05:00Yes, yes, yes, this beginning definitely works for...Yes, yes, yes, this beginning definitely works for me. Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-44729304467128682182013-11-04T13:24:28.994-05:002013-11-04T13:24:28.994-05:00Jesse Pinkman had a Hello Kitty telephone in Break...Jesse Pinkman had a Hello Kitty telephone in Breaking Bad.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-4694417140431659052013-11-04T11:55:00.530-05:002013-11-04T11:55:00.530-05:00I loved this beginning. I identify with Ruby, and ...I loved this beginning. I identify with Ruby, and I want to find out what happens to her. Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16246778550126578253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-49767376120218607702013-11-04T10:41:50.087-05:002013-11-04T10:41:50.087-05:00Thanks for your suggestions, all. This is my first...Thanks for your suggestions, all. This is my first MG, and a new start to my novel, so it is great to have so much feedback! I <3 First Impressions!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09462486350293703991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-76920229870772939132013-11-04T08:44:37.242-05:002013-11-04T08:44:37.242-05:00Happened to visit Dianne first, today. Left my com...Happened to visit Dianne first, today. Left my comments over there. Nice suggestions, Marcy. Best of luck to Robin. S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-21684891863123969212013-11-04T07:14:45.313-05:002013-11-04T07:14:45.313-05:00I'm curious too. I loved all the details.I'm curious too. I loved all the details. Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-47145821908397582882013-11-04T06:38:53.431-05:002013-11-04T06:38:53.431-05:00I'm also curious about Ruby and what's goi...I'm also curious about Ruby and what's going to happen. I could feel myself worrying about it, too. M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-73213750558322024052013-11-04T06:25:25.280-05:002013-11-04T06:25:25.280-05:00Obviously she doesn't get the safety of a ride...Obviously she doesn't get the safety of a ride to school and fears being picked on riding the bus. Why is a good question though.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-56469883836790582322013-11-04T05:47:18.734-05:002013-11-04T05:47:18.734-05:00I love love love the minutae of this beginning. It...I love love love the minutae of this beginning. It's definitely setting the reader up for something.... I think it flowed beautifully too and I couldn't believe it ended! I wanted to read more! Yay!!!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.com