tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post8566348069981094588..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: first impressions - Masquemshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-27505213391821122292011-07-07T23:51:20.760-04:002011-07-07T23:51:20.760-04:00Great thoughts on the first page. It is so critic...Great thoughts on the first page. It is so critical that the reader bond with the narrator right away I've learned. :)Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17323788304469008867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-39001811912161305742011-07-07T21:54:15.677-04:002011-07-07T21:54:15.677-04:00Sarah, it is hard to 'judge' a book by the...Sarah, it is hard to 'judge' a book by the first page but I do hope this is helpful to everyone because sometimes the first few pages is all you've got to convince someone (an agent) to request more.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-29027836574785706752011-07-07T11:32:23.641-04:002011-07-07T11:32:23.641-04:00Oh, dear, I'm afraid my comment has nothing to...Oh, dear, I'm afraid my comment has nothing to do with the post (although the first page and your comments were cool to read!). I've given you a blog award! Come by whenever you want to see it!Suhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862479925124552922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-25142969140531721602011-07-06T20:32:05.332-04:002011-07-06T20:32:05.332-04:00So interesting to see your different takes on one ...So interesting to see your different takes on one page! I think it's so difficult to judge these things based on only 250 words, but I do really enjoy reading this series. I left my feedback comments on Dianne's blog, but wanted to see what you had to say!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636585111057799728noreply@blogger.com