tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post901967028615419965..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: First Impressions - The Transparentsmshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-49147775054094193232012-07-10T12:29:14.704-04:002012-07-10T12:29:14.704-04:00I commented over at Dianne's blog, but had an ...I commented over at Dianne's blog, but had an additional thought. I totally want to know more about the sneeze. I think Daniel is off to a great start.Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-24357594262817543492012-07-10T05:04:02.644-04:002012-07-10T05:04:02.644-04:00Great start. A few phrases don't quite ring tr...Great start. A few phrases don't quite ring true "melodious sing-song" and "alerted to my presence" sound a bit too mature. Love the character though, can just see him cringing!Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-28061698054279263612012-07-09T20:16:15.262-04:002012-07-09T20:16:15.262-04:00This isn't a book I would normally read either...This isn't a book I would normally read either, but I felt that it was very well done! Kudo's!! :)DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-75199599951710238732012-07-09T11:17:23.944-04:002012-07-09T11:17:23.944-04:00Great start. This isn't the kind of book I typ...Great start. This isn't the kind of book I typically read, either, but it rings with authenticity. Daniel's voice and thoughts are completely believable as that of a sixth-grade boy.Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-10093112924216895392012-07-09T10:12:01.684-04:002012-07-09T10:12:01.684-04:00Thanks Marcy! You totally get Daniel. And that sne...Thanks Marcy! You totally get Daniel. And that sneeze IS important because right after he sneezes he realizes he's invisible.<br /><br />Thanks again to you, Dianne and your readers!<br /><br />VickiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com