tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post2851194029412395025..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: first impressions - Knights of Avalonmshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-73637541919167347892011-10-08T10:29:29.586-04:002011-10-08T10:29:29.586-04:00You're right -- and that's what Stephen Ki...You're right -- and that's what Stephen King is a master of, making us wonder what's going to happen next. Trying to harness that in my own writing is another matter!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-85105500093882479082011-10-08T09:30:32.813-04:002011-10-08T09:30:32.813-04:00School night makes me think they are in high schoo...School night makes me think they are in high school, so I've got no problem with age. Intriguing! Not knowing what comes next, this could be off the mark, but I'd leave out the "Just like the over victims" because it's kind of obvious. But I liked this start. A lot.Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-46499395467145545612011-10-07T23:36:00.257-04:002011-10-07T23:36:00.257-04:00I really like that opening. I defs want to read mo...I really like that opening. I defs want to read more!Suhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862479925124552922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-72609416318796878622011-10-07T21:15:58.569-04:002011-10-07T21:15:58.569-04:00I love these first impressions posts. Nice job! ...I love these first impressions posts. Nice job! Found your blog through Dianne Marenco Salerni's. :0) Christyerica and christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-60464812094846809632011-10-07T15:45:35.834-04:002011-10-07T15:45:35.834-04:00This is a very strong start, and makes this reader...This is a very strong start, and makes this reader want more, please.Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.com