tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post7997045462214828286..comments2024-03-28T05:05:30.116-04:00Comments on mainewords: Transitionsmshatchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-76471246792286378032016-03-26T03:19:46.332-04:002016-03-26T03:19:46.332-04:00thanks informations
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How are you? Ah, transitions.... I usu...Hi, Marcy,<br /><br />How are you? Ah, transitions.... I usually do a mix of smooth and breaks... I keep them at the most minimal. As the others have said, sometimes you really don't need to spell things out for the reader...<br /><br />News...<br /><br />I FINALLY GOT MY PLACE in FLORIDA~~ YAY~ I'm under contract for the cutest one bedroom condo in ORLANDO! Vaulted ceilings, FIREPLACE, TERRACE, and GARAGE... Ah, if it were only bigger. LOL. It's only 625 sq. ft., but the vaulted ceilings give the illusion of more space. Thankfully I am an EXPERT in utilizing every inch. I always make my place feel more spacious than they really are.<br /><br />Most people thing my loft is HUGE... it's only 875 sq. ft., but it appears to be over a thousand!<br /><br />I hope you'll let me know when you visit Orlando. We'll have to get together again!Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-54542623294151736262016-03-18T14:10:37.792-04:002016-03-18T14:10:37.792-04:00I love red-winged blackbirds.
I'm not sure i...I love red-winged blackbirds. <br /><br />I'm not sure if I'm any good at transitions. I have a feeling I jump from one thing to the next without much warning.... ADD?<br /><br />Your murder mystery sounds fun. I've tried writing one of those, but have had no success as of yet. It's such an intricate type of story to weave, I'm impressed by anyone who can write them. Michhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12456803425068822920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-13593553041887576512016-03-13T17:29:30.074-04:002016-03-13T17:29:30.074-04:00I only know that I hate when there is too much REA...I only know that I hate when there is too much REAL, I mean physical transition in novels :) Like when they constantly describe how a character is getting somewhere instead of just putting them there. I'm currently translating Marie Lu's ROSE SOCIETY and they're constantly in the street going somewhere because she's unable to come up with something interesting DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-41887967240557806362016-03-13T17:28:34.345-04:002016-03-13T17:28:34.345-04:00Some transitions are unavoidable, but most of the ...Some transitions are unavoidable, but most of the time, I don't think it's necessary to spell them out, because readers can quickly and easily fill in the blanks. As a reader, I'm much more annoyed by too many spelled-out transitions than I am by a lack of them.Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-86092343720348647062016-03-12T03:09:39.151-05:002016-03-12T03:09:39.151-05:00Good luck with the transition work. I just recentl...Good luck with the transition work. I just recently started reading fiction again and as a reader, they can be wonky. But I know you'll bang it out and get it the way you want.<br /><br />Happy Weekend.The Happy Whiskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438469476168485775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-24401977199507032442016-03-09T14:27:23.089-05:002016-03-09T14:27:23.089-05:00Yes, transitions between scenes work differently. ...Yes, transitions between scenes work differently. Sometimes abrupt works yet sometimes we have to weave the info in. Romance Book Havenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01268150556737773533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-74415268980270352642016-03-09T09:06:42.213-05:002016-03-09T09:06:42.213-05:00Ooh yeah. I definitely find repetition - character...Ooh yeah. I definitely find repetition - characters saying the same thing only in a different way - during my first draft. Even the second, sometimes. It's a tricky element to master. But each story is different and needs to be played with to get the 'feel' I want. During my first draft, I sometimes leave a note instead of actually writing the transition. Then, later on when I'm more confident about the other elements I'll develop the transition. S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-72532488615648455412016-03-09T03:12:55.557-05:002016-03-09T03:12:55.557-05:00I concentrate on getting the first draft down firs...I concentrate on getting the first draft down first of all and as the story begins to take on a life of its own, the transitions become easier to tackle. Wishing you lots of luck with that.Nicolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14674648154579013578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-44677533890754273822016-03-07T21:18:12.053-05:002016-03-07T21:18:12.053-05:00Love the red-winged blackbirds!Love the red-winged blackbirds!The Armchair Squidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739833215220853127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-82960446610194997892016-03-07T20:56:59.283-05:002016-03-07T20:56:59.283-05:00I'm not real great at transitions myself. Freq...I'm not real great at transitions myself. Frequently, I'll just put a break in. Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-23884828939308535252016-03-07T19:54:51.423-05:002016-03-07T19:54:51.423-05:00I often try to limit those transitions, but there ...I often try to limit those transitions, but there are necessary!<br />We've still got too much snow for our birds, so I enjoyed the video! :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-64446279317255951972016-03-07T19:49:29.865-05:002016-03-07T19:49:29.865-05:00I've cut back on transitions. Sometimes I thin...I've cut back on transitions. Sometimes I think authors provide information that's obvious to the reader. A good transition can be using a word from the previous sentence.<br /><br />Love,<br />Janie Janie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-20435965721505921002016-03-07T17:25:35.630-05:002016-03-07T17:25:35.630-05:00I try not to use many transitions. If I describe h...I try not to use many transitions. If I describe how a character gets from one place to another, it's only because the method is important or interesting. Otherwise, as a reader, I'll skip over that part.Dianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-45234960182791669872016-03-07T16:29:15.067-05:002016-03-07T16:29:15.067-05:00Good luck with them!Good luck with them!The Angry Lurkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01227314379603418332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-3280107003117205472016-03-07T13:53:28.848-05:002016-03-07T13:53:28.848-05:00Thank you for my continuing education into the lif...Thank you for my continuing education into the life and work of writers.<br />Love that blackbird too. And its song. We have some spectacular looking birds, but they don't sound pretty. At all.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-11677901099376489942016-03-07T11:42:50.563-05:002016-03-07T11:42:50.563-05:00I had a professor in college who really, really lo...I had a professor in college who really, really loved smooth transitions between paragraphs/ideas. I still remember that one paper I handed in that lack one transition. It was literally the one thing he took issue with in the entire paper. So close...<br /><br />There's one transition I'm struggling with now in my WIP. Everything I've come up with so far is just boring. Time to keep brainstorming!M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-52380093959274683652016-03-07T10:59:45.753-05:002016-03-07T10:59:45.753-05:00I think the problem with transitions--for me at le...I think the problem with transitions--for me at least--is they can be so boring. I often just skip them until I do final edits. By that time I know the story so well, that I can choose how to move from one scene/chapter whatever to the other so it's not boring. Or, and here's my favorite, I let my editor do it. Cheating, I know. :-)cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-87476746945521318932016-03-07T10:33:54.320-05:002016-03-07T10:33:54.320-05:00I can tell bad transitions better than define good...I can tell bad transitions better than define good ones :)<br />A recent example IMO was the X-Files re-boot. They rushed the whole thing. Rather than a 6 episode series, they should have made it a season and expanded a few of the story lines. Bad transitions made me tip my head like a puzzled dog.Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-5213792563734243502016-03-07T08:45:14.619-05:002016-03-07T08:45:14.619-05:00I don't put in transition chapters unless ther...I don't put in transition chapters unless there's some important characterization reveal in them, like secret inner thoughts as he's traveling. I'll end one chapter with the character deciding to go somewhere, or do something, or physically leaving the location, and then begin the next chapter with him there and give a (brief) description of the new place. <br /><br />Atm, I'm writing a Thriller/Mystery and must put super-important backstory in. (I HATE backstory!!) I literally just read a novel where Iain Rob Wright had his character fall asleep on a helicopter and did a flashback of a crucial scene (how the MC got terribly scarred and lost her baby). By using a dream/flashback, Iain successfully "shows" the backstory and makes it as entertaining as the here-and-now action. My character happens to be going somewhere in a helicopter, so guess how I'm going to deliver the crucial backstory? Yup, using Iain's dream/flashback style to show the disaster that happened to drive my good-guy hero into hiding and why he's wanted by the police.<br /><br />Unless you're writing a cozy mystery, each chapter should have an important plot point, or reveal, or an important character development in it. Mode of travel can be left to the reader's imagination.<br /><br />(Red-winged Blackbirds are lovely! I loved watching them when I lived in Mass.)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-18741769347988698862016-03-07T08:05:45.968-05:002016-03-07T08:05:45.968-05:00Sometimes you can just do a break like Alex said. ...Sometimes you can just do a break like Alex said. Or something like "After taking the bus to X" and then go on. Remember too, we don't need a blow by blow so some transitions we don't need to know.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8733289016000331233.post-27871066038676657822016-03-07T06:37:41.263-05:002016-03-07T06:37:41.263-05:00Some of my transitions are actual breaks, but thos...Some of my transitions are actual breaks, but those are more than just a character going from point a to point b. (They're next day, etc.) Sometimes it's as easy as just saying he arrived at the next location. People will figure out he left the first one and probably not care how he got there. Unless he did fly!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com