Congratulations to LG Smith over at Bards & Prophets. She is the lucky winner for this week's drawing. But there's still more stuff to win and you, too can be a winner. All you have to do is comment and be a follower. This week I especially appreciate comments on first impressions as do the authors of those first pages. I am not the last word in what works and what doesn't and the more feedback an author can get the better he can decide what works and what doesn't. If you have the chance, check out Wednesday's first page from Kate or come back tomorrow for another first page. Oh, and here's what's left for prizes:
1. a first chapter crit by me
2. Roget's Super Thesaurus, 3rd ed.
3. The first two books in Terry Pratchett's Discworld series