This flash fiction is brought to you by Chuck Wendig at Terrible Minds
who offered these three random sentences to choose from.
who offered these three random sentences to choose from.
“The borderlands expire thanks to the hundred violins.”
“A poetic pattern retains inertia.”
“The criminal disappears after the inventor.”
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The borderlands expire
thanks to the hundred violins
That’s what the
news said this morning.
It took long
enough to gather all those violins. I’ll wager those crazies never imagined
we’d be able to find one violin nevermind a hundred. But by God we did, and they
sure did the trick. Sucked the air right out of the place and killed everything
in there. Now all that’s left is to go in and clean up the mess.
That’s our job.
Well, mine and my
crew. We go in and clean up after unfortunate events, make the place livable
again for all the settlers. By the time they pay their 2K, there won’t be a
hint left of what happened.
Of course, when we
first get there, it’s a nightmare. Dead people everywhere, kids that will never
grow up, blue babies in cradles, people clutching at each other…We don’t look
hard. It’s better not to. We just put the bodies in the bags and load them onto
the trucks for disposal.
Still. It’s hard
not to notice how hard the crazies held on to life, right to the last. I see a
couple clasping hands so hard we have to put them in a bag together and a boy –
They look so
normal. Like us.
Don’t look.
Just load the
bodies.
After that we
clean the place out so that there's nothing left. Not a scrap of clothing, a dish, or a toy. By the time we’re done every house and business is empty
and ready for new occupancy. Move in condition.
That’s what the
settlers want.
After the job is done the haul is divided equally and that plus our hazard pay will hopefully see us all through 'til the next
job, which could be next week or next year. It depends on how soon another
borderland pops up, though these days it seems the crazies are everywhere.
It’s dark when we
part ways behind the walls, safe in our little neighborhoods where the air
smells like something other than death and chemicals. The light at the back
door guides me and soon I’m inside and home.
I sneak into the
room at the end of the hall where my boy lays sleeping, tucked in his bed
with his thumb in his mouth. I pull his hand away and give it something else to
hold onto: a small blue floppy rabbit with a music box inside.
Small hands pull
the rabbit close and I smile, but only until I remember the other boy, the one
that died before he could ever open the prettily wrapped box that had the rabbit.
Damn crazies. They
should’ve known better.
that was witty and interesting
ReplyDeleteQuite a whirlwind! Befitting the crazy prompt sentence.
ReplyDeleteI want to know more about these crazies. Cool story.
ReplyDeleteThis was quite clever! Need me some crazies.
ReplyDeleteSounds like something that could possibly expand into a longer SF story???
ReplyDeleteAnd, by the way, I enjoyed your novel, West of Paradise! Fun read. :)
Oh, what fun! Great job, Marcy.
ReplyDeleteThe one problem with good flash fiction - it's like eating a single potato chip. I always want more.
ReplyDeleteOh wow. Great job. So well done!
ReplyDeleteWell, that was creepy! :O I love creepy!
ReplyDeleteYour new header reminds me of "MIne!" "Mine!" from Finding Nemo. ;)
Funny... I was thinking the same thing as Lexa when I saw your header, Marcy. Terrific pic...
ReplyDeleteAlso agree with Lexa on your FF.... Creepy... well done.
Oooooh, that was good. Maybe you should consider writing a book...? HA! (I enjoyed your book, by the way.)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting and creative!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great piece - I want to read the entire book! Maybe there will be one. :)
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