Jack McCabe is our hero although admittedly he doesn't act like it at first, as illustrated in this excerpt where he has mistaken Katherine for Alanna...
“Sorry, sweetheart,” Jack said with a
nasty grin, “But you are a wanted woman. You might have thought you’d gotten
away but you left me alive and I gave a pretty good description of you as you
can see.”
“But...but this isn’t me,” Katherine
whispered.
“Yeah, right.” He snatched the poster out
of her hands and stuffed it into his pocket, “Now get dressed.”
“No, please,” Katherine said, her tone
turning desperate, “You’ve got to believe me. There’s been a mistake. I swear
this is not me. I never killed anyone and I certainly never robbed a bank or a
train or anything else. See? It says Alanna McLeod. My name is Katherine.”
“You think calling yourself by a
different name changes who you are?” He shook his head with a snort of
laughter, “Get dressed.”
“I will not!”
Jack raised the gun, and Katherine
flinched automatically.
“Either get dressed or say your prayers.
Unless of course you want to travel in your nightdress. In which case I can’t
vouch for your safety. After all, you never know who we might meet along the
way.”
“Please,”
Katherine said, her voice becoming a low, frightened whisper.
“Get dressed,” Jack repeated, his eyes as
cold as winter.
***
She might want to put something on...
ReplyDeleteYikes. Hoping that wasn't any kind of SPOILER!!
ReplyDelete"Get dressed or say your prayers" is a great line. :D
ReplyDeleteJack is one of my favorite names so I knew I would love this guy as soon as I read his name.
Also a fan of the character name Jack.
DeleteI would NOT want to travel in my nightdress. I'd change, pronto.
ReplyDeleteI bet she changed her clothes. I know I would!
ReplyDeleteVery intense scene and dialogue, Marcy... Very gripping!
ReplyDeleteI finished your book about 4 days ago (loved it!), but A-Z has me so overwhelmed I haven't written a review yet. I'll do it over the weekend, I promise. :)
ReplyDeleteSo good! I want to read more....
ReplyDeleteJack does not seem like a nice man.
ReplyDeleteHoly HOLD THE BUS! This is MY Jack, isn't it, Marcy? The Jack I swooned over after we first met. And Katherine ... OMGosh. #slapsforeheadreallyhard I am so lame. Woot, for Jack!
ReplyDeleteUh oh...
ReplyDeleteI believe he's going to be sorry he made that mistake.
ReplyDeleteJack and Katherine are such an intriguing couple! Just reading your posts this month reminds me of how much I enjoyed West of Paradise.
ReplyDeleteI don't know your story but this is a very intense scene!
ReplyDeleteChanging = good idea!
ReplyDeleteIs this the first chapter? Good ending to get our attention.
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