Katherine is our heroine, who thinks a trip to the past will cure her restless heart. Which it does, but not the way she thinks. Here's how it begins...
Katherine was bored.
It was a new experience. To be sure there had been moments of boredom,
brief interludes that had passed before they’d really begun. But those moments
had been tiny fragments of her life, fleeting bits of time that were over
before they had a chance to settle.
What she felt now was complete and utter boredom.
She glanced over at the king size bed where her fiancé sprawled
inelegantly beneath satin sheets, one arm draped over the bedside. Moonlight
flooded the room and bathed his form in quicksilver light. Perfect, she thought,
he was as perfect a man as she could have imagined, from his silky black hair
to his manicured toes. What was there not to like? He was intelligent, funny,
sensitive when it mattered, and an excellent lover. But the longer she studied
him the more she realized that there was nothing about him she loved. She had
no desire to snuggle close, no desire to kiss him as he slept, and not the
slightest inclination to wake him and share her troubled heart. And she knew at
that moment, despite the barrage of protests she would hear, she would not
marry Antonio D'Salvatore.
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You don't love him, then don't marry him.
ReplyDeleteBut it gets more complicated if you DID love him, or thought you did, and he's the perfect man so why don't you want to marry him? I thought you handled Katherine's confusion about her fiance splendidly, very real to life. I've known girls who went through all this exact thing, only they didn't have a time travel resort to help them through the confusion.
ReplyDeleteAnd...now that I have read WEST OF PARADISE, I know Kathrine has a lot more to look forward to!!!
ReplyDeleteYour book sounds awesome!!! Katherine should hold out for the right man. :) (I have a feeling she'll find him)
ReplyDeleteThat's a very sad snippet.
ReplyDeleteI haven't wanted to comment here, but I can never remember when I am in email to send you something. I can't open that file you sent me with your book on it.
ReplyDeleteAs for this post... it is terrible when someone "seems" to have everything but the heart just isn't in it.
Voice is everything and this has it in spades.
ReplyDeleteI think it would be hard to truly love a man with manicured toes. Ha! ;) Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteOoh, that's quite a critical moment!
ReplyDeleteYour writing is great. :)
Damn that's cold! LOL!
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