I have nothing - unless you want to hear about my revisions, which, I'm guessing not. I mean, we all know how it goes, right? It's simply a matter of reading your own story a million times and finding every word that isn't needed, every misspelling, every wrong tense, every passive sentence, every spot where you have to read the sentence again to understand what you obviously didn't make clear in the first place, and every place where one or more of your characters just isn't acting like themselves, or maybe isn't acting at all, you know, like Hayden Christiansen in those awful Star Wars movies with the even more awful Jar Jar (what the heck was George Lucas thinking?) Binks. C'mon, George, can't I please kill him?
But if you absolutely have to have something I'm over at unicorn bell today.